break
Gavin Dore18 Plays
•01 Jun 2022
I want a break I don't now if I can shake Ive got some new rymes to bake they say I'm a fake but that's a risk I will take they find your body in a lake rapped up all in cake ya. Feeling like I’m living Stuck in the basement, I’m just trying To get a higher placement, can't play my card But I’ll make it, I can’t wait a long time I’m anxious, I’ve just gotta get off The pavement, So they hear me across The nation, I want a break
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I wan hear more from you keep working bro ✅🤧🔥
Hey @gavindore, Thanks for the submission, here's our thoughts on 'break'! 💥 Get your headphones plugged in if you want to see a big increase in the quality of your track. 🎧 Your delivery is smooth, great flows here! 🎶 This is how beats and lyrics should go together, you've got great timing, well done! 🌠 This beat is working well for you! 🎼 Good recording quality here, well done. ✔ You've got talent for sure, we think this track just needs a few tweaks to really showcase that. 🤟 We hope to hear more from you! All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
u snapped so hard don't stop doing music
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