juice boos
Bobby Barton18 Plays
•31 May 2022
Life is hard, Hope I make it, It’s a risk, But I’ll take it, Feeling like I’m living Stuck in the basement, I’m just trying To get a higher placement, Life is hard, But I’ll make it, I can’t wait a long time I’m anxious, I’ve just gotta get off The pavement, So they hear me across The nation, Life is hard.
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Yoooo Nice vibes Auto tune creative Bars okay Delivery okay Flow decent Keep going 🔥🙌🏽
Hey @bobbybarton, We're gonna review your track 'juice boos'. Let's get it! Your tracks would be of much greater quality if you use headphones next time. 🎧 Great delivery, your voice adds rhythm to the track! Focus on maintaining that flow throughout, you're just a little off beat a couple of times. 🙏 This beat choice is great for you! 🎼 Try improving your recording quality if you can. You've got the talent, keep grindin' and puttin in the work and who knows what you can achieve! 👌 Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
this is a nice masterclass Bobby keep going hard
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