ON ME

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They come up on me I fight back on them they don't back down on me they all jump me they try to finish me off but I get back up and finish them the cops show up on me they take me to the hole and they question on me they release me because I am innocent then I go back out and get jumped they beat the everliving crap out of me But I still get back up and fight back on me on me on me.... oh yeah.. on me on me on me... we always fight back we don't back down.... we win our fights On me.. on me... on me... They come up on me I fight back on them oh yeah I don't back down and I win because we win our fights.. on me ... on me... on me.. oh yeah... oh yeah.. On me....... we stand our ground we stand up for ourselves we ain't sissies oh yeah On me. On me... we stand up for each other YEAH YEAH YEAH On me YEAH on me

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LIL'MAN

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4 years ago

Titus Osborne

4 years ago

love the vibe lil homie, make your voice a lil louder tho man. gotta be heard! keep grinding 🙏🏻🖤👑 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Good 💛 Impression: Dope 🔥

Rap Fame A&R

4 years ago

Hey @lilmannn, Thanks for taking the time and letting us give feedback on 'ON ME'! 💥 Your vocals are a little unclear, maybe try recording closer to the mic? You're getting really close to having your timing on the beat perfect, you're just a bit off in places. 🙏 Great choice of beat, this is pairing very well with your delivery style. 🎼 The recoding quality needs improvement, this will help your track a lot. Try adding some of our built in audio effects which could really help boost this track! To really enhance this track we suggest making your vocals sound as crisp as possible! We can see your potential, just put a bit more time into your next track! 👌 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

Yuliya

4 years ago

nice track cool 😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎

Savage factz

4 years ago

nice track man. try using some of the audio features on here and try new stuff

Sarah De Niro

15 days ago

Tag This ⭐ Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

Jay Villin

3 months ago

Strong Bars 💪 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥