Time To Leave_My Life_
π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯ God Blessed This One..... I Give You The Credit And The Honor For This That You May Use This To Touch Life's And Inspire And Encourage My Bothers And Sisters That Don't Understand The Gravity Of Goodness And Love That Has Been Placed On Our Lives To Be Able To Effortlessly Conquer And Overcome All In Our Life. Love Endlessly And Live Vicariously..... Amen. π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯ALL I'M GOING TO SAY IS THIS TURNED OUT TO UNEXPECTEDLY BECOME THE HARDEST FREESTYLE YET FOR ME. THERE IS SOOO MANY OUT THERE THAT ARE WAY BETTER THAN ME I'M JUST STARTING TO EMBRACE THIS AS A DREAM AND LEARN HOW TO TAKE IT TO THE NEXT LEVEL FOR ME PERSONALLY I HONESTLY THOUGHT AND FELT LIKE I MESSED UP RECORDING THIS BUT RAN WITH IT AND IT TURNED OUT BETTER THEN EVER EXPECTED LOL THIS DEFINITELY A TOOWEIRD BANGER FORSURE......ENJOYπ₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯
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Bars: Perfect π― Delivery: Perfect π― Impression: Perfect π―
NIce job bro this is great Bars: Dope π₯ Delivery: Dope π₯ Impression: Dope π₯
Hey @xwhilxd33z2w31rdx, Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'Time To Leave_My Life_'! π₯ The vocals are a tiny bit too quiet, see if you can put them up a bit! You got bars! Lyrics are on point, we like 'em a lot. π We like the rhymes in here, good job.β¨ Your delivery is smooth, great flows here! πΆ Your timing is perfect, you're landing perfectly on the beat. π The beat works perfectly with your voice!! 𧨠Yess, liking your recording quality here, very clear. β Can we Buy U a Drank? Because the effects used here would make T-Pain proud! β‘ This track really makes the listener feel something. π The track sounds great, we just think you could've brought a little more energy and passion in that delivery. We see the potential here, with a few adjustments we can see the room for progression! π€ We enjoyed listening to your music, please share with us again! πͺ All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
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