Life is Hard (00:16)
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•30 May 2022
yeah going to space about to save a alien girl from a dangerous planet name mars and these big head aliens wont do a thing whe i pull out the Glock shoot them in the head and make the disappear they gone trying to escape them on a space ship but we cant they fast be like zoom zoom
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Bars: Great 🎉 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Yo @khyreecouncil! Waddup. Let's take a look at 'Life is Hard (00:16)'! 💥 Your track could really benefit from a headset to improve the recording quality! 🎧 Think about where the words fall in line with the beat and experiment. This will improve your flow. Great choice of beat, this is pairing very well with your delivery style. 🎼 You're using effects in the right way! Gives your track a lil' something extra! We can see the potential there, keep hustlin' and your tracks will improve in no time. 👌 It was great listening to your track, we hope to see a lot more of you in the future, please feel free to share some more tracks with us! 🙌 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
keep on it bro RESPECT!💯 nice little rhymes
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