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Shooting for the stars I'm an astronaut you say that you're a goat I put you in a curry pot I get it popping like a fist full of dread locks on a clean beat I get funky as a gym sock they don't know I'm ill til they test me I lay so many bars My vocab looks arrested God flow, I can get on a track and bless it side shows, I call my competition They ain't ready I'm cold as the winter soldier Avengers Bucky a bad man but I'm out the cage like a trustee hello Rap Fame, it's your poster child bout to renovate cuz I plan to be here a while so ya better learn my name like the school teacher cuz I'm bout to run the game I'll see you in the bleachers you can't see me like my mode is stealth I'm ahead of my time, dont get ahead of yourself

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2 years ago

Hey @jeredprice.6839097, We're gonna review your track 'ghetto '. Let's get it! Your tracks would be of much greater quality if you use headphones next time. 🎧 You're getting really close to having your timing on the beat perfect, you're just a bit off in places. πŸ™ We like this beat with your voice! You know how to choose 'em! The overall quality is pretty low, try changing some things to improve the recording. Put a bit more time into your next track stop make the most of your potential! πŸ‘Œ All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

Bars: Dope πŸ”₯ Delivery: Dope πŸ”₯ Impression: Dope πŸ”₯

2 years ago

Bars: On point 🎯 Delivery: Great πŸŽ‰ Impression: Dope πŸ”₯

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