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29 May 2022

School shooter Ok well fuck it, he was so reluctant fuckn discuss it, was bullied in public Talked about like he was just nothing? Nobody to vent to Momma was to high,when he went-to Her- to -get...to get into. Whatever he was off into But he was raised right? Told never give into his feelings But what he was taught Could never justify how he's feeling All he was, Feeling was Feelings. Thinking one day just killm! Let's call the kid Billy Billy had fights cause he had too But family was saying he was tripping Just ignore them and pass through Even told Billy Walk any if you have too All they do is watch and ridicule at school it's not abuse ,But Billy is not amuned Now he got arsenal , practicing daily Even the teacher can get it They sat and watched ,Why they did it Made a plan to go do it Feel asleep wit it fully loaded His dream was mad lucid He was in the school Ready ,strapped with guns Told everybody nothing Just ready to go.use it He started waving and shooting At everybody is sight But nobody Was moving And all shot fired but the bullets was not moving Like why he couldn't shot'm Neverfelt the sting of da shot Shot himself in da throat His dream was over Died before he was woke. his emotions took control of the wheel He slept wit his gun To much drinking before ,Planning to kill he was asleep wit a loaded weapon family said suicide wasn't trying to paying attention They no clue he was planning To kill them all when the sun rise teach the whole school a leason And only then die Could it be God's sight He took his Life Before he murdered Everything that caused him pain And who ain't treat him right. Look in on yo kids computers Rather be overprotective ,then raise A bully or the next lil school shooter.

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2 years ago

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Great flow good delivery, on point ๐Ÿ’ฏ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ

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