hope I make it
Ryder.t19 Plays
•29 May 2022
Life is hard, Hope I make it , It’s a risk, But I’ll take it, Feeling like I’m living Stuck in the basement, I’m just trying To get a higher placement, Life is hard, But I’ll make it, I can’t wait a long time I’m anxious, I’ve just gotta get off The pavement, So they hear me across The nation, Life is hard.
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You got solid bars try not using auto tune other then that good job
What's up @josiahthomas.7205129, Thanks for the submission, let's have a look at 'hope I make it'! 💥 Your tracks would be of much greater quality if you use headphones next time. 🎧 Nice improvisation with the lyrics, soundin real good. 🧠 Good flow here, it really adds some sauce to your track. 🎶 This is how beats and lyrics should go together, you've got great timing, well done! 🌠 Good choice of beat! 🎼 Keep grinding! We can see you got what it takes, just some small tweaks and this track will be total fire. 🤟 We can't wait to hear your next fire track! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
Really cold and creative. Slow but leaves an impression of deliberate style
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