i'll make it
23 Plays
•25 May 2022
Life is hard, Hope I make it, It’s a risk, But I’ll take it, Feeling like I’m living Stuck in the basement, I’m just trying To get a higher placement, Life is hard, But I’ll make it, I can’t wait a long time I’im anxious, I’ve just gotta get off The pavement, So they hear me across The nation, Life is hard.
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What's up @gabrielharrelson, Thanks for the submission, let's have a look at 'i'll make it'! 💥 Get your headphones plugged in if you want to see a big increase in the quality of your track. 🎧 Smooth delivery here, keep it up! 🎶 You're getting really close to having your timing on the beat perfect, you're just a bit off in places. 🙏 Good beat choice, defo adds to the track. 🎼 Any chance you could improve the recording quality, it takes a lot away from your track. Put a bit more into your next track, we can see your talent! 👌 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
You will make it dont stop trying mane 😎🔥
turn ya mic up or get se.betterbhead phones but keep stompin 😤
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