We're at War
ExosarangjaNever been much for logic You can say that I'm melodic You can tell by the way that I speak that I'll never be stopped so you treat me like im caustic Ehh Time has taken its toll yeah Washed away all the soul yeah Now we just mindlessly scroll yeah Just preparing for the coming storm I can't say no more If youre scared baby there's the door It'll melt you to your core Crawling onto shore This is d-day and we're at war. Like a lion hear me roar Nah more of a freight train Got you bowing to my reign Power coursing through my veins Got you circling down the drain yuh Out here rising higher Got you on a pyre You said you wanted fire Man you sounded dire Might have to rewire Clocks bout to expire Yeah I'm breaking this beat yuh Can't handle the heat yuh Just admit defeat yuh Don't come for me yuh. Just want to see where this will go go go Let the beat erode rode rode rode Gonna keep it low low low Gonna make the speakers blow blow blow blow yeah Just preparing for the coming storm I can't say no more If youre scared baby there's the door It'll melt you to your core Crawling onto shore This is d-day and we're at war. Like a lion hear me roar Last stop We won't ever let it flop Back off Don't begin to act tough Blacktop Now I caught you slipping up Spilling all the extra blood Crawling through the sludge It's not nice to hold a grudge. Okay I can see im losing you And yeah I know we are almost through but You can't believe that everything is true yet Here you are looking for something new.
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I hear you fam keep grinding #savagefactz
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Yo @exosarangja! Waddup. Let's take a look at 'We're at War'! π₯ You've thought about what you're trying to say in this track and it shows, nicely done. π This track has a nice rhythm to it. Great flows! Focus on maintaining that flow throughout, you're just a little off beat a couple of times. π This beat choice is great for you! πΌ The recording quality could be improved. Try playing around with your mic positioning to improve the quality. Put a bit more into your next track, we can see your talent! π All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
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