Make It Happen (21:53)
Daniel Bunnell21 Plays
•23 May 2022
Wake up in the morning, And I'm down bad, Look around the room, And the feeling’s sad, Touch up on my pockets, Gotta make some cash, Call my bro up quick, Come get me fast, Say he got somethings, On his mind to do, Give him about an hour, Then he's coming through, Heard him beep the horn, Then I ran out, Money on my mind, No more handouts, Get my pen and pad, I'm about to write some more, Hit that stage then tell them, Turn the lights down low, Open up my mouth, I heard the crowd scream go, We about to make it rapping, We are about to make it happen, We about to make it rapping, We are about to make it happen, Yeah.
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I hear you fam keep grinding #savagefactz
Hey @danielbunnell, Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'Make It Happen (21:53)'! 💥 Using headphones next time would defo improve the quality of your tracks! 🎧 Your delivery is super clean, this is sounding good. 🎶 You're a bit off beat at times, try recording, listening back and correcting the parts where you're off! Yess, we are liking this beat with your bars! 🎼 The recording quality could be improved. Try playing around with your mic positioning to improve the quality. Put a bit more time into your next track stop make the most of your potential! 👌 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
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