pop off
Davion Willison39 Plays
•23 May 2022
Life is hard, Hope I make it, It’s a risk, But I’ll take it, Feeling like I’m living Stuck in the basement, I’m just trying To get a higher placement, Life is hard, But I’ll make it, I can’t wait a long time I’m anxious, I’ve just gotta get off The pavement, So they hear me across The nation, Life is hard.
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I hear you fam keep grinding #savagefactz
Hey @davionwillison, Thanks for the submission, here's our thoughts on 'pop off'! 💥 Your tracks would be of much greater quality if you use headphones next time. 🎧 Nice improvisation with the lyrics, soundin real good. 🧠 Keep flowing on the beat like this, the delivery on this track is smooth. 🎶 You defo have the ability to hit this beat hard, just try and maintain this throughout the whole track! 🙏 The beat is fire, nice choice. 🎼 The overall quality is pretty low, try changing some things to improve the recording. Thanks for the track, we enjoyed listening! Keep 'em comin' All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
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