Life’s not fair
Cool man JayLife is a challenge i don’t know where to start life’s not fair but It can’t end here I got my hand right next to my heart feeling the pumping you see the lake u just want to jump in sink to the bottom don’t have any air but I can’t die here u got to get up can’t let them see That inside of me It is a mess i know I can’t deny Give me a minute or give me an hour I got to go over a couple of things Life is a challenge that I can’t loose Life’s not fair so I better go do something out there
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Hi there @coolmanjay, Here's some feedback on your track 'Life’s not fair ', thank you for sharing with us! 💥 Headphones would be great to help improve the quality of your releases. 🎧 Great concept. Love the story your bars tell! Smooth delivery here, keep it up! 🎶 Great timing on the beat, there were only a couple of moments where it slipped. This beat is working well for you! 🎼 We need to clean up the recording quality here, play around with it and see what you can do! We think this track could use a little extra spice. Try out our vocal FX rack to give your track a little something extra. Keep practicing your craft! Every track you make is going to get a little better! We can't wait to hear what else you got in store! All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
Life is a challenge i don’t know where to start life’s not fair but It can’t end here I got my hand right next to my heart feeling the pumping you see the lake u just want to jump in sink to the bottom don’t have any air but I can’t die here u got to get up can’t let them see That inside of me It is a mess i know I can’t deny Give me a minute or give me an hour I got to go over a couple of things Life is a challenge that I can’t loose Life’s not fair so I better go do something out there
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