Rap Fame A&R

2 years ago

Hey @jjchampman, Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'Pain'! 💥 Keep flowing on the beat like this, the delivery on this track is smooth. 🎶 Focus on maintaining that flow throughout, you're just a little off beat a couple of times. 🙏 Great beat choice, really works with the track! See if you can clean up the recording quality, it's not helping the track. You've got the talent, keep grindin' and puttin in the work and who knows what you can achieve! 👌 Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

JJCHAMPMAN

2 years ago

yeah this is describing what my twin sister is going through hope you like it👍also TRN FOR LIFE🖖👌🤌🤞🤲🤘🤟🖕🖕🖕🖕

JJCHAMPMAN

2 years ago

Pain, Pain, Jj ,JJ I can't take it everybody abandoning me, I can't make everyone picks a chad over me, It's so hard living this sad life I don't know if it is my time I don't know if I did a crime Bro I ain't lyin you should know I am tryin living my tryna hold my tears living my life hiding from my peers living it it in a way thats so sad the hear bro I need to get a beer I don't wanna live my life fear maybe I just wanna disappear yeah I hear it loud and clear you don't want me to be here into my heart its being burned, being sered boy I don't wanna be here the definition of pain while all these other people are experiencing gain they all the same nothing has changed the house that same wooden frame I can't forget from which I came bro just please leave sain yo I know you came but just leave me alone everything won't be the same I know your sharing your wisdom, but everything you claim and say is not helping my situation for some reason these stinking people wanna hurt me they taking it to new heights aviation Just embrace me I think I'm going crazy Iam so lazy but I don't wanna start changing it's dissatisfying the fact that I have to say I'm sorry while I am crying the fact they scoul at my voice for things to change I am trying even though when they had no friends I was there for them first, Damg this a curse to a fitting rage I'm but to burst, into, uhhh I can't take it everybody abandoning me, I can't make everyone picks a chad over me, It's so hard living this sad life I don't know if it is my time I don't know if I did a crime Bro I ain't lyin you should know I am tryin living my tryna hold my tears living my life hiding from my peers living it it in a way thats so sad the hear bro I need to get a beer I don't wanna live my life fear