Rap Fame A&R

2 years ago

Hey @smokey_goose, We're gonna review your track 'POK'. Let's get it! Get your headphones plugged in if you want to see a big increase in the quality of your track. 🎧 The bars could use a little improvement. Try writin' in different places to get the dome poppin'. Fell off just once or twice but otherwise you rode that beat like a pro! This beat choice is great for you! 🎼 The recording quality is quite low, it would be great to improve it somehow. Submit more for feedback with us to see how you're progressing! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

SMOKEY_GOOSE

2 years ago

nigga takin shit ima hit em in his shit do it alone like a Post Malone.nigga run up on me im hit em wit a stone. and im makin ace girl moan.YOU BATTER STAY IN YO ZONE.I HEARD YO MAKIN A CALL THROUGH A JAIL PHONE. you pissed on yo self when jay left in yo tha flow. yo cusion better stay low cuz i know he gonna go.