i love my life
big 34 sadboy57 Plays
โข21 May 2022
Just chilling back we're listening some good music back in 2000s I don't know where I'm going but I know you're my love. I just caught a case. So tell God, pray for me. I don't know where is my love but I'm coming home to you. Because I can't stay too long the love we have is too strong.i love my life I love when you give me butterfly kisses I love your smile I call you my misses someone told me down the block, some one got shot, I'll call that life I'll call a 16 having a baby young call that life. So I'll give the Kitty wet. To keep you wet. we have that love like Barney acquire. It's your life, my life is ur life together we will be Bonnie and Clyde. So we get give bussing, so you better believe. I will put your leg over me and do doggie style maybe we knew each other's in or maybe we were just meant to find each other in this one
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What's up @sadloser, Thanks for the submission, let's have a look at 'i love my life'! ๐ฅ Your vocals are a bit quiet compared to the beat, put 'em up a little for a perfect mix. Your rhyming is dope, it sounds real nice. โจ Loving the concept of this track, it has real purpose. ๐ Good flow here, it really adds some sauce to your track. ๐ถ Focus on maintaining that flow throughout, you're just a little off beat a couple of times. ๐ Great beat choice, really works with the track! See if you can clean up the recording quality, it's not helping the track. Its amazing how youโre able to share this part of yourself through music! So powerful! ๐ Keep working on your tracks, practise makes perfect! ๐ We enjoyed listening to your music, please share with us again! ๐ช All the best, The Rap Fame Team ๐
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