Rap Fame A&R

2 years ago

What's up @willbuckley, Thanks for the submission, let's have a look at 'livin proof'! 💥 The vocals aren't coming out clear, test different mic positions and try to keep the distance between you and the mic consistent. Landing on the beat is hard. You gotta practice and listen back to get it perfect! This beat is working well for you! 🎼 The recoding quality needs improvement, this will help your track a lot. Becoming an accomplished rapper is a grind, keep working on your craft and your talent will be clear soon. 👌 We hope our feedback is useful to you and we look forward to hearing what track you release next! 🙌 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

Will Buckley

2 years ago

My brain is known to slice like a sword,that's why they call me adjacent(a Jason)/ Hit like a ton of bricks,but I'm hardly a mason/ Livin proof...I'm probably the look on all of the faces/ Who look like they stare,a step ahead of flight,you better move before you get hauled off in spaceships/ Listen I been sickening since I turned a mic on/ Lifted a middle of the month check to keep the lights on/ Right on with the slither of a slimy python/ I never choked,but kept on constrictin around rappers necks with this venom I use to gripe on/ Gettin knocked out my shoes...guess Nike come with doors/ They all wanna shot like my psyche come with spores/ Or...perhaps the burlap come with excitement out of stores/ Cuz I been baggin up more than rhymes since like my hypemen out on tour/ It's likely powder sure,but the mites be proud of yours/ That's why I ran the term...and I wood not chew any tightened crown of thorns.....