pain

21 Plays

18 May 2022

yeah take me away from here I can't take this much more what else am I waiting for I've stolen and I'm broken laying awake praying the lord my soul to take I'm breaking, my soul is shaking I need to go take me away, I don't choose to stay take me away please, what else you want me to say you gave me a thousand roses and this path, I chose it but now I don't want it so now I ask take me away

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2 years ago

sometime in life you go through pain... this is a great song... welcome to rap fame... I am looking for to hearing more good music from you... thanks for joining the family... keep up the good music

really appreciate the honesty in passion in this record keep pushing homie. you got good content

2 years ago

Hey @stevenmedina777, We appreciate you sharing 'pain' with us! 💥 Nice flow here - delivery is so important. 🎶 Your flow is really getting there! You only missed the beat like once and otherwise you were killing it. We like this beat with your voice! You know how to choose 'em! The recording quality could be improved. Try playing around with your mic positioning to improve the quality. Why not try using some of our in-app effects, such as auto-tune or equalizer, to take your track to the next level? We loved listening to your music, please share with us again! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

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