twain
Jonathan Gibson17 Plays
•18 May 2022
Life is hard, Hope I make it, It’s a risk, But I’ll take it, Feeling like I’m living Stuck in the basement, I’m just trying To get a higher placement, Life is hard, But I’ll make it, I can’t wait a long time I’m anxious, I’ve just gotta get off The pavement, So they hear me across The nation, Life is hard.
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I really like the beat, vocal wise you probably have some good lyrics l, it's just you were real muffled sounding so I could not make out the words very well. still a good attempt at a song tho. keep up the good work bro
Hey @jonathangibson.7166173, Thanks for the submission, here's our thoughts on 'twain '! 💥 Your track could really benefit from a headset to improve the recording quality! 🎧 Your voice is a bit quiet in the mix, bring it up a lil' to get the balance perfect. Your voice flows nicely over the track. Well delivered!! 🎶 Great timing on the beat, there were only a couple of moments where it slipped. This beat choice is great for you! 🎼 The recording quality is quite low, it would be great to improve it somehow. Sometimes it's hard to create a perfect track, keep trying and work on your craft! 👌 We hope you send us more tracks in the future, we'd love to see how you take our feedback on board! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
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