Octo

29 Plays

17 May 2022

nigga I'm the guy what I'm saying is not true bigger representatives to you I tell the truth I gave evil up that day like God just told the youth the kid don't believe in God but he never gave up u they siad prove it judgments is improving I gave up all my life to see these other humans movements I could have so many bars of gold if I was moving I could have the world alone at heart I'd have influence I got saturn on my side but I'm a fish it's cold blooded anyways I swim make it drip splash she get minute made watch the foriegn car near the mix I got history like hurricane in its bliss sunflowers and its gliss aye Champagne when it's cold outside wedding rings when it's cooled out side new things like a prince driving buy I gave up knowledge and all of its favorites shes just a dream and she's gonna be famous I stepped on foot with a team built on strategy wdmd and some diamonds on dragons I just be talking but people don't hacket their Is one being thats human that cracking it I be on purple witch letters in bubbles I be on twitch but white letters in bubbles aye I can see ur tears cold blood sweat on the back of ur ears I can see ur normal I can see ur feelings dive into ur mind I can drip that feeling riding in a flood of the roses in gardens gates on the other side excuse u miss pardon me orchid's in pink is a mutual warning codeine in sinks make u dive in a fountain

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your flow works really well with this instrumental. You have a really nice Vibe going on. Try enuncing your bars a bit better so those dope punchlines crosses over. I enjoy listening to this and look forward to hearing more from you great work.

good job and welcome to rapfame. Hope to hear more tracks from you. awesome track.

2 years ago

What's up @saturngotringzon, Thanks for the submission, let's have a look at 'Octo'! 💥 Turning the vocal volume up a notch would really improve the mix. Work on writing bars to get your meaning across. Smooth delivery here, keep it up! 🎶 You're a bit off beat at times, try recording, listening back and correcting the parts where you're off! We like how the beat sounds with your voice. 🎼 We see the potential here, with a few adjustments we can see the room for progression! 🤟 We enjoyed listening to your music, please share with us again! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

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