nigga I'm the guy what I'm saying is not true bigger representatives to you I tell the truth I gave evil up that day like God just told the youth the kid don't believe in God but he never gave up u they siad prove it judgments is improving I gave up all my life to see these other humans movements I could have so many bars of gold if I was moving I could have the world alone at heart I'd have influence I got saturn on my side but I'm a fish it's cold blooded anyways I swim make it drip splash she get minute made watch the foriegn car near the mix I got history like hurricane in its bliss sunflowers and its gliss aye Champagne when it's cold outside wedding rings when it's cooled out side new things like a prince driving buy I gave up knowledge and all of its favorites shes just a dream and she's gonna be famous I stepped on foot with a team built on strategy wdmd and some diamonds on dragons I just be talking but people don't hacket their Is one being thats human that cracking it I be on purple witch letters in bubbles I be on twitch but white letters in bubbles aye I can see ur tears cold blood sweat on the back of ur ears I can see ur normal I can see ur feelings dive into ur mind I can drip that feeling riding in a flood of the roses in gardens gates on the other side excuse u miss pardon me orchid's in pink is a mutual warning codeine in sinks make u dive in a fountain
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your flow works really well with this instrumental. You have a really nice Vibe going on. Try enuncing your bars a bit better so those dope punchlines crosses over. I enjoy listening to this and look forward to hearing more from you great work.
good job and welcome to rapfame. Hope to hear more tracks from you. awesome track.
What's up @saturngotringzon, Thanks for the submission, let's have a look at 'Octo'! 💥 Turning the vocal volume up a notch would really improve the mix. Work on writing bars to get your meaning across. Smooth delivery here, keep it up! 🎶 You're a bit off beat at times, try recording, listening back and correcting the parts where you're off! We like how the beat sounds with your voice. 🎼 We see the potential here, with a few adjustments we can see the room for progression! 🤟 We enjoyed listening to your music, please share with us again! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
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