Dainzel King

Feeling Blue

Dainzel King
Feeling Blue

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16 May 2022

i was thinking about the past thinking about how the grass seemed green now things are grim broken dreams hope on the floor moping the grime im moping all the time good times are hard to find tears in my eyes i feel drupy like slim a bunch of groupies by my side blue dreams, feeling blue a saxaphone in my room you wont pick up the phone i was thinking about you ita true

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2 years ago

Yo @dainzelking, It's time for us to take a look at 'Feeling Blue'! 💥 You can clean up the recording quality here by using headphones to minimize feedback! Tight rhymes, love the structure here. ✨ There's some real nice flows on here, you just fall off the beat a couple times. 🙏 Good choice of beat! 🎼 Sometimes it's hard to create a perfect track, keep trying and work on your craft! 👌 We hope you send us more tracks in the future, we'd love to see how you take our feedback on board! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

2 years ago

i was thinking about the past thinking about how the grass seemed green now things are grim broken dreams hope on the floor moping the grime im moping all the time good times are hard to find tears in my eyes i feel drupy like slim a bunch of groupies by my side blue dreams, feeling blue a saxaphone in my room you wont pick up the phone i was thinking about you ita true

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