Pain

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15 May 2022

I been having to many bad dreams,I need to go to a closet,not even pain-killers can't stop it.I need to launch her on snap chat, to ask here why am I like that.I wake up at 6:00 A.M. feeling depressed, because life cant. Give me one more chance.I been having to many bad dreams,even the doctors say they dunno how to fix it.I need to go to a closet,not even pain-killers can't stop it.I need to launch her on snap chat, to ask here why am I like that.

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2 years ago

What's up @justzester, Thanks for the submission, let's have a look at 'Pain'! 💥 Using headphones will really improve the quality of your track! 🎧 Great concept. Love the story your bars tell! We think the delivery is fire, keep it up. 🎶 You're getting really close to having your timing on the beat perfect, you're just a bit off in places. 🙏 Good choice of beat! 🎼 Can you improve the quality of your recording somehow? It will really improve the sound of your tracks. Really feeling the emotion on this track, hits real hard. 💜 Keep making small improvements and you'll get there in no time! 👌 We can't wait to hear what else you got in store! All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

2 years ago

I been having to many bad dreams,I need to go to a closet,not even pain-killers can't stop it.I need to launch her on snap chat, to ask here why am I like that.I wake up at 6:00 A.M. feeling depressed, because life cant. Give me one more chance.I been having to many bad dreams,even the doctors say they dunno how to fix it.I need to go to a closet,not even pain-killers can't stop it.I need to launch her on snap chat, to ask here why am I like that.

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