jay

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15 May 2022

my nigga slimy just like the slim watch who approaching if you got a problem get him wicked no caps in my rap like y'all rats I don't post shit on ig so stop watching getting straight to the bread I'm just having fun I don't play that I know little kid they call him the hood baby really with the shit take your bitch

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2 years ago

Hey @jaelinharris.7156068! Thanks for sharing 'jay' with us! 💥 Love the story telling on this track, it's engaging. 👍 Nice flow here - delivery is so important. 🎶 You got potential here, just some parts of the track you're missing the beat. But we know you can do it! 🙏 Good choice of beat here! 🎼 The recording quality is quite low, it would be great to improve it somehow. Keep working on your tracks, practise makes perfect! 👌 We enjoyed listening to your music, please share with us again! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

2 years ago

my nigga slimy just like the slim watch who approaching if you got a problem get him wicked no caps in my rap like y'all rats I don't post shit on ig so stop watching getting straight to the bread I'm just having fun I don't play that I know little kid they call him the hood baby really with the shit take your bitch

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