Ellie G.
Ellie G.

The Summer Life

The Summer Life

242 Plays

15 May 2022

Somebody, somebody, body, body it’s finally here and I’m so excited and exhausted. Wanted to go float and row down on that river. I quiver and shiver due to the saltwater on me. I ain’t got no time to relate but I found a coconut underneath the palm tree that’s east of me. I’m gonna swim underneath the ocean. I constantly feel like I’m drowning underneath the waves but my emotions beams then screams out for the shore. Feels like everyone dislikes me. I scream and shout and let it all out, out, out, out on myself. Sometimes I doubt myself and it drains me out. It’s beyond of what I can do. I’ve fallen in the waters so the dolphins come and save me. I just wanna hide hide hide and never come come come, to the shore. I can never see out of my eyes just to see you again. I’m already tied up in a bottle, living the bougie kind of life! It softens the demons that lay under our souls!

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2 years ago

I had to try really hard to hear you so just work on making your voice more clear and turn it up the beat sounds nice and just work on the fluidity between your verses trying to make them smoothly blend together either by changing the way you say it or the word completely Bars: Nice 🌟 Delivery: Nice 🌟 Impression: Nice 🌟

2 years ago

let chat Bars: On point 🎯 Delivery: On point 🎯 Impression: Great 🎉

2 years ago

@justcaliber alr then! Thxs for the advice!

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