life is hard
Joshtyn SchindlerLife is hard, Hope I make it, It’s a risk, But I’ll take it, Feeling like I’m living Stuck in the basement, I’m just trying To get a higher placement, Life is hard, But I’ll make it, I can’t wait a long time I’m anxious, I’ve just gotta get off The pavement, So they hear me across The nation, Life is hard.
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Hi there @joshtynschindler, Here's some feedback on your track 'life is hard', thank you for sharing with us! 💥 Nice flow here - delivery is so important. 🎶 Focus on maintaining that flow throughout, you're just a little off beat a couple of times. 🙏 Good choice of beat here! 🎼 See if you can clean up the recording quality, it's not helping the track. Put a bit more time into your next track stop make the most of your potential! 👌 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
Life is hard, Hope I make it, It’s a risk, But I’ll take it, Feeling like I’m living Stuck in the basement, I’m just trying To get a higher placement, Life is hard, But I’ll make it, I can’t wait a long time I’m anxious, I’ve just gotta get off The pavement, So they hear me across The nation, Life is hard.
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