oj

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15 May 2022

she eating my dick with chop sticks pull up on a nigga with too big Glocks things you know me im all on that top thing fucking on yo bitch with yo big long things tell that missg goldman the she could suck my hope you end up in hell resting in piss

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2 years ago

Hey @lowenlewis, Thanks for the submission, here's our thoughts on 'oj'! 💥 Using a headset will hugely improve the recording quality here, consider giving it a try! 🎧 Keep flowing on the beat like this, the delivery on this track is smooth. 🎶 You got potential here, just some parts of the track you're missing the beat. But we know you can do it! 🙏 Yess, we are liking this beat with your bars! 🎼 The track isn't helped by the recording quality, try cleaning that up next time. Why don't you try some autotune or reverb to really enhance your track? Sometimes it's hard to create a perfect track, keep trying and work on your craft! 👌 We hope you send us more tracks in the future, we'd love to see how you take our feedback on board! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

2 years ago

she eating my dick with chop sticks pull up on a nigga with too big Glocks things you know me im all on that top thing fucking on yo bitch with yo big long things tell that missg goldman the she could suck my hope you end up in hell resting in piss

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