DAY ONE

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15 May 2022

Day 1. When I stop and think about it, nobody has ever had my back like ME. Nobody else carries these limbs and this mind of mine but ME. there's acquaintances in this world but nobody is your friend like yourself. (ME) I wrote it to take my mind off of the hard times I've been going through more than ever. it's spiritual warfare. I'm just Fighting for my life and my soul to have peace like I did when I was a kid. I address all of my "Day 1's." but only they'll know what I mean when they hear it. This is the beginning of your end. Day 1. -LøCöMøTiVe

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2 years ago

ok my boi 💪🏿🖤 only thing that needs to be done is your vocals need to be turned up so we can hear you clearly dope track I'ma put you on my label keep dropping that 🔥

2 years ago

Hi there @locomotive222, Here's some feedback on your track 'DAY ONE', thank you for sharing with us! 💥 Make sure you put headphones in on your next track as the feedback is affecting the recording quality! Great rhyme skills, you got the poetry flowin'! You've thought about what you're trying to say in this track and it shows, nicely done. 👍 Your delivery is super clean, this is sounding good. 🎶 Your timing is perfect, you're landing perfectly on the beat. 🌠 We think you chose the right beat for this track, suits your style perfectly. 🎼 The vocals are nicely recorded, soundin' clean! Thanks for submitting music for us to listen to, we can't wait to hear what else you got in store! All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

2 years ago

Day 1. When I stop and think about it, nobody has ever had my back like ME. Nobody else carries these limbs and this mind of mine but ME. there's acquaintances in this world but nobody is your friend like yourself. (ME) I wrote it to take my mind off of the hard times I've been going through more than ever. it's spiritual warfare. I'm just Fighting for my life and my soul to have peace like I did when I was a kid. I address all of my "Day 1's." but only they'll know what I mean when they hear it. This is the beginning of your end. Day 1. -LøCöMøTiVe

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