Jeweler ft. twofoldjack (17:26:18)
Boyboy Aj78 Plays
•14 May 2022
Aye yuh yuh aye ye yew ye ye so so I was walking down the street then I saw the boy that was going to blow that heat then I talk to my homie to him to pass the glock to me so I went and shot him over sees then I ran out the car then I started to beat my feet yeah then I come and shot at you block rock shock walk pock pop him like a pop rock ha ha bla bla you is a real rat rat sat like a king my homie is that told him to sit in the back that boy really want the smoke imma turn him in to a pussy cat cat he want the smoke you lil brother going to take a long nap
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