Rap Fame A&R

2 years ago

Hey @lawrencechisolm, Thanks for the submission, we listened to 'BrooklynZoo (23:04)', here are our thoughts 💥 Your bars are too quiet, we're losing them in the beat. Bring the vocals way up next time so we can hear you! This track defo has meaning, what a great way to engage your listeners. 👍 Great delivery, your voice adds rhythm to the track! There's some real nice flows on here, you just fall off the beat a couple times. 🙏 The beat is fire, nice choice. 🎼 See if you can clean up the recording quality, it's not helping the track. Sometimes it's hard to create a perfect track, keep trying and work on your craft! 👌 We hope you send us more tracks in the future, we'd love to see how you take our feedback on board! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

Lawrence Chisolm

2 years ago

Double time all the time that I doubled back Talk about my procedures and got it back every time the shit feels like a heart attack Save words to situations and I'll hold it back what is every time I feel regular it seems like I'm holding back I'm holding back but that's a heart attack I'll attack or that's an insomniac is the sound yet present of a patience Of why I have this panic attack