Rap Fame A&R

2 years ago

Yo @218jaylin! Waddup. Let's take a look at 'pale skin '! 💥 Good rhyming here, keep it up! ✨ Your voice flows nicely over the track. Well delivered!! 🎶 The beat is dope and really works for this track. 🎼 The recording quality ain't great on this one, can you try find a way to improve it? We have a bunch of options to really add to your track, try using some effects on your vocals next time! A lil' more work and you're gonna take off, keep pushin'. 🤟 Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

218 Jaylin

2 years ago

pouring up in a hospital bed snoring up in the tropical land you best know i got my obstacles planned bitch i’ll go down in an honorable stance 80 percent what they offered my brand 30 percent untouchable strand negative 10 outside please turn off my fan untouchable guy they gonna burn off my hand unfaithful light they might burn off my hand fuck em all didn’t leave em a grand death bed left me dead yes man this wasn’t the plan i’m paler thank the clan realer than you man my times a comin you mice a bummin fuck a fight i’m comin nice for nothin what’s in my will? probably a 5 dollar bill not a mountain a hill taste the fountain i’m i’ll man of steel always stayed real secrets not peeled i don’t need a shield maybe i do i really miss you my purpose is through fuck you to the roof i feel like a burden fuck is up with this curtain i’m not so certain i’m feeling u certain