Orgo
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β’13 May 2022
i helped you dig a hole, then you threw me in it thought we were friends, but who was I kidding lucre famished will leave you hollow in the end I contemn money, purloin it all, keep everything what you exhibit i can and am living without the perturbing and atempting to figure it out life is hard at times as i continue to heap I'm here for a reason that bullet missed me im saying
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Hey @jaeone, Thanks for the submission, here's our thoughts on 'Orgo'! π₯ Your bars are good, keep it up! π Your rhyming is tight. β¨ Great concept. Love the story your bars tell! Your flow here needs improvement, try and work on this for your next track. You're getting really close to having your timing on the beat perfect, you're just a bit off in places. π Try switchin' up the flows to add some more variation on this one! π― The overall quality is pretty low, try changing some things to improve the recording. We think you've got something, you just need a bit more work to make something great! π We loved listening to your music, please share with us again! πͺ All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
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