Rap Fame A&R

2 years ago

Hey @stkshawn, Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'Many Men'! 💥 Some nice rhyming on this, we hear you! Your flow here needs improvement, try and work on this for your next track. Great beat choice, really works with the track! Good use of effects here, really adds to the track ⭐ We think you've got something, you just need a bit more work to make something great! 👌 We loved listening to your music, please share with us again! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

StkShawn

2 years ago

C1.y'all better check the score its three an 0 y'all better check again 2.Three put on yo mask his body tagged see we jus sined again 3.We gone get tha drop from this lil thot or his lil close's Friend 4.We gone sweep tha block with these lil shot's an 5xgone kill many men 1.Three i think I missed jus hit tha block im finna spend again or we can jus switch spots you get tha an pop out wen you see em 2.I jus spot a opp its time to shoppin im finna cope me one catch you with yo bitch hit ha in ha shit she need ha hair re-done 3.Had To Watch My Back Off In Them Streets That Shit Was Never Fun 4.I Got To Man Opps Up In These Streets I Need A other Gun if my brotha fight then ima fight it aint no one on ones 5.Get Up Out of line i Up Tha 9 you know them bullets burn bitch i aint no teacher jus a real nigga bet i can tech you sum 6.When we get tha low hop in tha low Shii we dont slide for nun