Jason Spade

2 years ago

@rapfame_ar_team hey guys, thanks for the feedback, I will try to improve my raps

Rap Fame A&R

2 years ago

Hi there @xxbky3jewi, Here's some feedback on your track 'Khonshu', thank you for sharing with us! 💥 Using headphones will cut out the feedback and really help the quality. 🎧 We think the delivery is fire, keep it up. 🎶 You're getting really close to having your timing on the beat perfect, you're just a bit off in places. 🙏 We like this beat with your voice! You know how to choose 'em! The recoding quality needs improvement, this will help your track a lot. Try using some of our vocal FX (ft. Autotune!) to spice up your next track! It was dope listening to your music, share with us again for feedback! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

Jason Spade

2 years ago

Yeah (yeah, yeah) (I ain’t tripping) (ay, ay, ay, ay,) (ay, 94 don’t need no brakes) I feel like Khonshu in the night sky Giving off some bright light You know that i wont cry You know that i’m not high I’m a saddler that rides the moonlight “find those travellers!” they yell But they kill the warriors of the moon, right and I ain’t gonna let them kill Imma whoop them with a belt Pain that will make you melt I am the god of the night sky And I will make you cry Cuz you ain’t by my side Yeah, yeah, yeah I am super wealthy You ain’t even stealthy I’m like the python I’m super deadly Get outside, lock the door Look into the night sky If you don’t see me Just Wait for time to pass by My rhyme, my rap, my voice, my producer We all fly, we all fly, we all fly, imma fly Orange warrant flying by Raw chicken getting fried I can see all of this The night is an abyss