Rap Fame A&R

2 years ago

Hi @profit_of_neigbors! Welcome to our feedback of 'Genisis'! 💥 Your tracks would be of much greater quality if you use headphones next time. 🎧 Love the natural sounding flow here. Very cool! 🎶 You fell off the beat a couple times! Give it a listen back, find the parts where you're off and practice those. The beat is fire, nice choice. 🎼 The recording quality is quite low, it would be great to improve it somehow. Why don't you try some autotune or reverb to really enhance your track? Becoming an accomplished rapper is a grind, keep working on your craft and your talent will be clear soon. 👌 We hope our feedback is useful to you and we look forward to hearing what track you release next! 🙌 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

The Profit

2 years ago

Frye … get up I used to be a millionaire Don’t mind me just losing hair I really haven’t any care But I guess that’s something you can’t bare I made a county named it Viking government I’m always fighting And history I’m just rewriting verses spitting like it’s lightning ex wife took everything Even took that diamond ring But it don’t matter I’m the king But now they listen hear me sing I know I’m too old for lies spit some fax make you cry My favorite player was always Frye That’s the day that music died Now Confucianism is Confucianism in neighborism Now these traditions are my rhythms and neighborism I think this country needs less laws Think Y’all need some bear crawls Soon this system it will fall Right now I feel 10 feet tall Y’all just show some chivalry sit and listen to my ministry Me myself and I the trinity This day will live in infamy