.r.i.p.

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10 May 2022

I'm depressed I'm stressed depression is always on my mind it's like it's always chasing me and it's only chasing me but in other words that's kind of a good thing because it ain't hurting anyone else and the family is safe yea yea yea yea yea yea Yea yea I take pills but then I stop taking the pills but then then they make me insane and then they make me land inside my grave but then I tell these guys don't make the same mistake please please please but these people don't listen and then they get drunk and then the next thing you know is they go r.i.p. but then they don't but instead they don't die they go to Jail and tell them they shouldn't have done it and that they shouldn't have done drugs

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2 years ago

Yo @jhonnyvillelaprera, It's time for us to take a look at '.r.i.p.'! 💥 Vocals bit unclear on this one, try recording closer to your mic. Your delivery is super clean, this is sounding good. 🎶 There's some real nice flows on here, you just fall off the beat a couple times. 🙏 Great choice of beat, this is pairing very well with your delivery style. 🎼 Just a few little things and this track will be there, you got it! 💪 It was dope listening to your music, share with us again for feedback! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

I'm depressed I'm stressed depression is always on my mind it's like it's always chasing me and it's only chasing me but in other words that's kind of a good thing because it ain't hurting anyone else and the family is safe yea yea yea yea yea yea Yea yea I take pills but then I stop taking the pills but then then they make me insane and then they make me land inside my grave but then I tell these guys don't make the same mistake please please please but these people don't listen and then they get drunk and then the next thing you know is they go r.i.p. but then they don't but instead they don't die they go to Jail and tell them they shouldn't have done it and that they shouldn't have done drugs

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