Rap Fame A&R

2 years ago

Yo @s3v3ns1nssm1th, It's time for us to take a look at 'life is hard'! 💥 Keep flowing on the beat like this, the delivery on this track is smooth. 🎶 You fell off the beat a couple times! Give it a listen back, find the parts where you're off and practice those. Good beat choice, defo adds to the track. 🎼 Any chance you could improve the recording quality, it takes a lot away from your track. Just a couple small changes and this track would really be a testament to your skills! 🤟 We can't wait to hear what else you got in store! All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

S3V3NS1NS SM1TH

2 years ago

Life is hard, Hope I make it, It’s a risk, But I’ll take it, Feeling like I’m living Stuck in the basement, tryin To get a higher placement, Life is hard, But I’ll make it, I can’t wait a long time I’m anxious, I’ve just gotta get off The pavement, So they hear me across The nation, Life is hard.