Rap Fame A&R

2 years ago

Hey @edgarlemus.7138049! Thanks for sharing 'first and good rap' with us! 💥 Using headphones will cut out the feedback and really help the quality. 🎧 Your voice flows nicely over the track. Well delivered!! 🎶 There's some real nice flows on here, you just fall off the beat a couple times. 🙏 Good choice of beat! 🎼 Try improving your recording quality if you can. Becoming an accomplished rapper is a grind, keep working on your craft and your talent will be clear soon. 👌 We hope our feedback is useful to you and we look forward to hearing what track you release next! 🙌 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

Edgar Lemus

2 years ago

I put my life on standby I was winning by a landslide You ever seen a beat get eaten By a man live? You tune in to my IG, I'll show you why I can't lie, Baddies in my DM, I want em, that's a damn lie. I fly solo came in the world dolo Labels beating on my door, They asking me for promo. Look I been a boss, Get crossed I'm “A.I”-ing, Flying off the jump, I'm Jordan I'm stage diving. I’m a club packa, My nine'll stay firin', Beefing like Lover Boy And Donda on an island. I'm shooting my shot with Kim while Ye stay wildin', Paparazzi getting off shots, That's paid timing. I'm a diamond in da ruff, I’on dine em I’on cuff em, Splash em in they face, Kelly Rowland with the cup when the doors open up, We don't speak, keep it hush. When the doors open up, We don’t speak, hush