Rap Fame A&R

2 years ago

Hey @jamaildannard.7129773, Thanks for the submission, we listened to 'NefariousThough (15:04)', here are our thoughts 💥 You can clean up the recording quality here by using headphones to minimize feedback! Dope delivery, the track flows real nice. 🎶 There's some real nice flows on here, you just fall off the beat a couple times. 🙏 The beat is dope and really works for this track. 🎼 The recoding quality needs improvement, this will help your track a lot. Try adding some of our built in audio effects which could really help boost this track! Sometimes it's hard to create a perfect track, keep trying and work on your craft! 👌 We hope you send us more tracks in the future, we'd love to see how you take our feedback on board! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

Jamail Dannard

2 years ago

i begin this story with the word glory ambitious Hustler grinding hard chasing dollars and cents grab the microphone and represent demigod 23 in this bitch the ghost in the dark light up the room when i spark you with this tool intelligence equal wisdom knowledge and understanding strategic planning visions of success got to stay active chasing paper monetary gains jamail f dannard true life i built the foundation strengthened my nation cmn for life shining bright like the moonlight and the sun eternal energy never die like true love passionate about this rap shit drop bars forever the star emcee for fun pass me the mic son Jamail f Dannard wrote the lyrics and performed as well