Rap Fame A&R

2 years ago

Hey @dylanmatthew.7129743, Thanks for the submission, we listened to 'this is just a demo', here are our thoughts 💥 Work on improving how you deliver your bars and different flows to your tracks. Try improving your timing, you're not quite on beat here. Great beat choice, really works with the track! We need to clean up the recording quality here, play around with it and see what you can do! We can see the potential there, keep hustlin' and your tracks will improve in no time. 👌 It was great listening to your track, we hope to see a lot more of you in the future, please feel free to share some more tracks with us! 🙌 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

Dylan Matthew

2 years ago

This is just a demo, When I hop on beats, You know I cause a dilemma, I’m gonna slow it up, Let me turn down the tempo, No I don’t play games boy, This not Nintendo, And this is how you flow, Like a green light, All you do is go, Don’t think too much, Just let it sink slow, I give them bars for wisdom, Truthfully peace, Salute to the queens, Salute to the Kings, Make sure to stay up, Try and stay positive, And there’s always a lot to give, Just make sure you spread the love kids