Rap Fame A&R

2 years ago

Hey @lil__smoke_on_dat, Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'Astronaut (12:00)'! 💥 Using headphones can drastically improve the quality of your track, try using them next time to give your track that extra boost! 🎧 Seems like your voice is getting hidden by the beat, put the vocals up for a great mix! You fell off the beat a couple times! Give it a listen back, find the parts where you're off and practice those. We like how the beat sounds with your voice. 🎼 The recording quality ain't great on this one, can you try find a way to improve it? Keep practicing your craft! Every track you make is going to get a little better! We can't wait to hear what else you got in store! All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

Daxton cobb

2 years ago

Shooting for the stars I'm an astronaut you say that you're a goat I put you in a curry pot I get it popping like a fist full of dread locks on a clean beat I get funky as a gym sock they don't know I'm ill til they test me I lay so many bars My vocab looks arrested God flow, I can get on a track and bless it side shows, I call my competition They ain't ready I'm cold as the winter soldier Avengers Bucky a bad man but I'm out the cage like a trustee hello Rap Fame, it's your poster child bout to renovate cuz I plan to be here a while so ya better learn my name like the school teacher cuz I'm bout to run the game I'll see you in the bleachers you can't see me like my mode is stealth I'm ahead of my time, dont get ahead of yourself