Hey @candaysiah.6709115,
Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'deseme'! ๐ฅ
Using headphones will cut out the feedback and really help the quality. ๐ง
Lit bars, keep 'em comin. ๐ We like the rhyming, it's tight. โจ Love the story telling on this track, it's engaging. ๐
Smooth delivery here, keep it up! ๐ถ Good effort with your timing, you are mostly on the beat here, just watch out at certain points not to lose it. ๐
Try adding some of our built in audio effects which could really help boost this track!
Improving the audio quality would seriously level up this track!๐
Becoming an accomplished rapper is a grind, keep working on your craft and your talent will be clear soon. ๐
We hope our feedback is useful to you and we look forward to hearing what track you release next! ๐
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team ๐
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Hey @candaysiah.6709115, Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'deseme'! ๐ฅ Using headphones will cut out the feedback and really help the quality. ๐ง Lit bars, keep 'em comin. ๐ We like the rhyming, it's tight. โจ Love the story telling on this track, it's engaging. ๐ Smooth delivery here, keep it up! ๐ถ Good effort with your timing, you are mostly on the beat here, just watch out at certain points not to lose it. ๐ Try adding some of our built in audio effects which could really help boost this track! Improving the audio quality would seriously level up this track!๐ Becoming an accomplished rapper is a grind, keep working on your craft and your talent will be clear soon. ๐ We hope our feedback is useful to you and we look forward to hearing what track you release next! ๐ All the best, The Rap Fame Team ๐
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