can i

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07 May 2022

I can’t wait a long time I’m anxious, I’ve just gotta get off The pavement, So they hear me across The nation, Life is hard.

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2 years ago

Hey @marlonjones.7130554, Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'can i'! 💥 Your tracks would be of much greater quality if you use headphones next time. 🎧 Good flow here, it really adds some sauce to your track. 🎶 You're riding this beat with perfect timing, love it! 🌠 Great choice of beat, this is pairing very well with your delivery style. 🎼 You've got the talent. Just give it a lil' more work and this track will be fire!! 🤟 We loved listening to your music, please share with us again! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

2 years ago

I can’t wait a long time I’m anxious, I’ve just gotta get off The pavement, So they hear me across The nation, Life is hard.

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