Lil Joiner2.0

2 years ago

Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯

Rap Fame A&R

2 years ago

Hey @1400spiritanimal, We appreciate you sharing 'spirit freestyle' with us! 💥 Your rhyming is dope, it sounds real nice. ✨ Keep flowing on the beat like this, the delivery on this track is smooth. 🎶 Good beat choice, defo adds to the track. 🎼 Dope recording, nicely done. ✔ The rhyming on here is pretty solid but the subject matter and lyricism could definitely be a little more unique, intricate and personal to you. There's also a bit too much processing on your vocals, ease off the vocals a lil bit for a cleaner track. There's some nice wordplay in here too, you just gotta keep building on that flow! Keep grinding! We can see you got what it takes, just some small tweaks and this track will be total fire. 🤟 We can't wait to hear your next fire track! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

James botha

2 years ago

Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥