Rap Fame A&R

2 years ago

Yo @lil_tate.7066844, It's time for us to take a look at 'Yo girl'! 💥 Using headphones next time would defo improve the quality of your tracks! 🎧 Love those rhymes, keep that poetry flowin'. ✨ Dope idea, we enjoyed the story of the track. 👍 Nice flow here - delivery is so important. 🎶 Your flow is really getting there! You only missed the beat like once and otherwise you were killing it. Great beat choice, really works with the track! You've got the talent, keep grindin' and puttin in the work and who knows what you can achieve! 👌 Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

lil_tate

2 years ago

@lil_tate.7066844

lil_tate

2 years ago

Ayyeee it’s meeeeee lil frikin tate nah Nah nahn if u mess with me you gone get smacked in the face ya and yo girl, shcame to my place she played my games and got a big base we played forsa and I won a race she threw the controller at my face and I tied her up with my shoe lace Ima punch you in the face how you like my fist I will give you one more taste I will end your life make it seem like a waist I don’t got any more lines so let’s copy and paste yea it’s me lil friken tate if you mess with me you gone get smacked in the face yea yo girl she came to my place we played games she got a big base we played forza and I won the race she threw the controller at my vace I tied her up with a shoe lace