Rap Fame A&R

2 years ago

Yo @jakorijoiner, It's time for us to take a look at 'diss'! 💥 Make sure to use headphones to improve the sound of your track. 🎧 Keep flowing on the beat like this, the delivery on this track is smooth. 🎶 You fell off the beat a couple times! Give it a listen back, find the parts where you're off and practice those. Great beat choice, really works with the track! The overall quality is pretty low, try changing some things to improve the recording. You've got the talent, keep grindin' and puttin in the work and who knows what you can achieve! 👌 Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

Jakori Joiner

2 years ago

diss Fredo bang Feeling like I’m living Stuck in the basement, I’m just trying To get a higher placement, Life is hard, But I’ll make it, I can’t wait a long time I’m anxious, I’ve just gotta get off The pavement, So they hear me across The nation, Life is hard.