SEEDS
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•05 May 2022
HAVE YOU EVER SEEN A FLOWER GROW IT'S MAGICAL, IN SEASONS IT DIES TO RESURRECT THAT'S SUPERNATURAL, LIFE EXIST IN ALL FORMS, BEAUTIFUL AS A STORM WASHING THE PAIN AWAY, WATCHING THE RAIN TRANSFORM AND BRING CHANGE TO THE DAY, HOW COME WE TAKE ADVANTAGE IN THE STRANGEST WAY, TO YOU IF AIN'T BENEFICIAL THEN YOU DON'T BANK ON PAY, YOU TAKE ADVANTAGE OF A PERSON KINDNESS WEAKNESS LOYALTY MEEKNESS IT BOILS ME TO SPEAK THIS, TURN THE OTHER CHEEK SCRIPT, WHO PREACH THIS, TEACH THIS COWARDLY IDOLATRY, BIOLOGICALLY HAVING ME WEAK SO YOU CAN OVERPOWER ME, STRONGER THAN I DESIRE, THOUGHT TO BE THE WISER, WISDOM AIN'T SOMETHING YOU JUST GET FROM A WIRE, LISTENING TO SO AND SO, YOU HEARD ABOUT THE FIRE, GOSSIP IS HOT TOPICS THAT CONSISTS OFF HEARSAY, SPECULATION IS HATING WHEN NOT MET WITH INVESTIGATION, JUDGEMENT IS GRUDGE MENT TO SHAME A NAME, IT'S A SHAME WHEN YOU DON'T HAVE A THING TO CLAIM, YOUR MOUTH MOVE WITH TWO LIPS HOPING YOUR ROSE PEDAL TO A PEDESTAL PLANT BASED BETTER FOOD, A SLANT SCAR ON YOUR FACE A BUCK FIFTY I'M MEDICAL, SETTLE GROUNDS I LAY IT DOWN SOIL DIRTY NIGGAS PLAY AROUND IN MUD IT'S A DEATH WISH SO YOU CAN CHECK THIS OFF AS AN EXIT,
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Hey @nahumthoth, We're gonna review your track 'SEEDS '. Let's get it! The vocals aren't coming out clear, test different mic positions and try to keep the distance between you and the mic consistent. Your flow is a little off, we think you can really tighten things up there. Try improving your timing, you're not quite on beat here. The recording quality ain't great on this one, can you try find a way to improve it? We recommend checking out our Masterclasses. They're a really helpful way to learn tip to improve your skills! Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
HAVE YOU EVER SEEN A FLOWER GROW IT'S MAGICAL, IN SEASONS IT DIES TO RESURRECT THAT'S SUPERNATURAL, LIFE EXIST IN ALL FORMS, BEAUTIFUL AS A STORM WASHING THE PAIN AWAY, WATCHING THE RAIN TRANSFORM AND BRING CHANGE TO THE DAY, HOW COME WE TAKE ADVANTAGE IN THE STRANGEST WAY, TO YOU IF AIN'T BENEFICIAL THEN YOU DON'T BANK ON PAY, YOU TAKE ADVANTAGE OF A PERSON KINDNESS WEAKNESS LOYALTY MEEKNESS IT BOILS ME TO SPEAK THIS, TURN THE OTHER CHEEK SCRIPT, WHO PREACH THIS, TEACH THIS COWARDLY IDOLATRY, BIOLOGICALLY HAVING ME WEAK SO YOU CAN OVERPOWER ME, STRONGER THAN I DESIRE, THOUGHT TO BE THE WISER, WISDOM AIN'T SOMETHING YOU JUST GET FROM A WIRE, LISTENING TO SO AND SO, YOU HEARD ABOUT THE FIRE, GOSSIP IS HOT TOPICS THAT CONSISTS OFF HEARSAY, SPECULATION IS HATING WHEN NOT MET WITH INVESTIGATION, JUDGEMENT IS GRUDGE MENT TO SHAME A NAME, IT'S A SHAME WHEN YOU DON'T HAVE A THING TO CLAIM, YOUR MOUTH MOVE WITH TWO LIPS HOPING YOUR ROSE PEDAL TO A PEDESTAL PLANT BASED BETTER FOOD, A SLANT SCAR ON YOUR FACE A BUCK FIFTY I'M MEDICAL, SETTLE GROUNDS I LAY IT DOWN SOIL DIRTY NIGGAS PLAY AROUND IN MUD IT'S A DEATH WISH SO YOU CAN CHECK THIS OFF AS AN EXIT,
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