la.ky
la.ky

Don’t Roast, Be Real ✨

Don’t Roast, Be Real ✨

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05 May 2022

ayyy, I ain’t what you think I am all those jabs you throwing, just cause you mad by this energy I’m glowing, ayy I ain’t what you say I am come on sit down we can talk & be friends all this pain I’ve swallowing, all those lies you been following, and this fake shit keep borrowing , the center stage, I see, just know that just ain’t me, it’s time that you all know, it really goes to show, who’s real and who’s not how you gunna put me on the spot, you think you can just keep on this way, trust me karma gives the pay you can say you want, but it’s all just a front I’ve been through this before, actually my whole life’s been a war, don’t think I can’t play, you’ll know one day, when your swallowing everything you spit, thinking damn why her life so lit it’s cause I always stayed true, and through all the bullshit I just grew all this pain I’ve swallowing, all those lies you been following, and this fake shit keep borrowing , the center stage, I see, just know that just ain’t me, I never knew why they all hate, try to come back a minute too late, yeah, I heard everything you say, I don’t know why it has to be this way, can you please tell me why, I’m always portrayed as the bad guy, I just want some real friends, still waiting for the ones heaven sends. Don’t get to close, they gunna put you on roast, because they feel your a threat, their auras be glowing red, it’s just like in school, gossiping so they look cool. your better off on your own, look how far you’ve made it alone. We’ll not quite alone, I give all the Credit to his Holy Throne, Do onto others as you’d want done, it’s time heal and be real hun. all this pain I’ve swallowing, all those lies you been following, and this fake shit keep borrowing , the center stage, I see, just know that ain’t me,

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1 year ago

2:11 on wasting time idk the gap but the edit on the voice was fire. This track emphasizes to natural you in it the most. Just a suggestion and I am def not an expert. Never written anything and I’m 22 days into recording and editing on a iPhone with air pods on a bathroom stoop. Record you a few for you. Like zero people around so you won’t hold anything back. Ima write more below this

1 year ago

Nice first track 🔥🔥🔥out the gate

2 years ago

Hey @la.ky, Thanks for the submission, here's our thoughts on 'Don’t Roast, Be Real ✨'! 💥 Almost a perfect mix. Try increasing the vocal volume a lil' so we can hear you better over the beat. Your rhyming is dope, it sounds real nice. ✨ This track has a nice rhythm to it. Great flows! You defo have the ability to hit this beat hard, just try and maintain this throughout the whole track! 🙏 Great beat choice, really works with the track! We have a bunch of options to really add to your track, try using some effects on your vocals next time! Loved listening to this track, we hope our feedback is useful to you and we are looking forward to hearing what track you release next! 🙌 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

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