entry

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05 May 2022

Life is hard, Hope I make it, It’s a risk, But I’ll take it, Feeling like I’m living Stuck in the basement, I’m just trying To get a higher placement, Life is hard, But I’ll make it, I can’t wait a long time I’m anxious, I’ve just gotta get off The pavement, So they hear me across The nation, Life is hard.

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2 years ago

What's up @etdaman, Thanks for the submission, let's have a look at 'entry'! 💥 Your track could really benefit from a headset to improve the recording quality! 🎧 This track has a nice rhythm to it. Great flows! Good effort with your timing, you are mostly on the beat here, just watch out at certain points not to lose it. 🙏 Good choice of beat! 🎼 Any chance you could improve the recording quality, it takes a lot away from your track. You've got the talent, keep grindin' and puttin in the work and who knows what you can achieve! 👌 Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

2 years ago

Life is hard, Hope I make it, It’s a risk, But I’ll take it, Feeling like I’m living Stuck in the basement, I’m just trying To get a higher placement, Life is hard, But I’ll make it, I can’t wait a long time I’m anxious, I’ve just gotta get off The pavement, So they hear me across The nation, Life is hard.

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