lil jay
Imari LeeLife is hard, Hope I make it, It’s a risk, But I’ll take it, Feeling like I’m living Stuck in the basement, I’m just trying To get a higher placement, Life is hard, But I’ll make it, I can’t wait a long time I’m anxious, I’ve just gotta get off The pavement, So they hear me across The nation, Life is hard.
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Hi @imarilee! Welcome to our feedback of 'lil jay '! 💥 Your tracks would be of much greater quality if you use headphones next time. 🎧 Your voice flows nicely over the track. Well delivered!! 🎶 Focus on maintaining that flow throughout, you're just a little off beat a couple of times. 🙏 Good beat choice, defo adds to the track. 🎼 See if you can clean up the recording quality, it's not helping the track. We can see the potential there, keep hustlin' and your tracks will improve in no time. 👌 It was great listening to your track, we hope to see a lot more of you in the future, please feel free to share some more tracks with us! 🙌 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
Life is hard, Hope I make it, It’s a risk, But I’ll take it, Feeling like I’m living Stuck in the basement, I’m just trying To get a higher placement, Life is hard, But I’ll make it, I can’t wait a long time I’m anxious, I’ve just gotta get off The pavement, So they hear me across The nation, Life is hard.
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