Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Hey @johnathanbishop, Thanks for the submission, here's our thoughts on 'takeoff'! 💥 Your track could really benefit from a headset to improve the recording quality! 🎧 The vocals are a little unclear, you may wanna try recording closer to the mic to get a better sound. Try recording yourself and listening back to perfect your timing over the beat. The recording quality ain't great on this one, can you try find a way to improve it? How about you try one of our Masterclasses? It's a handy tool to improve your sills by using our ready to go using. We loved listening to your music, please share with us again! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

TMBeatZ

3 years ago

I got new battle please comment much respect either way fire lyrics till I die forever only honest votes much respect for giving me a chance 👌 💯 hope you enjoy 👌 💯 #TmLackOfDominance

Johnathan Bishop

3 years ago

you call me john rocket, everyday I go count up the profit, your girlfriend love me im the bitch prohet, she like to eat me like a breakfast sausage, all yall pussy ass rapper hostage, feel like naruto ima be hokage, bitch ya breathe stank yo ass need some tooth paste, cant hang with niggas mane these niggas be 2face, ion smoke with everybody they might try to get me laced, dont hang wit scary niggas who cant even take they own case, im not tay k but in some fast doing the race, i need me real love that shit called hate.